Add appropriate details to the following essays. The first lacks detail; the second lacks presentation. Over the centuries men have been the leaders in fashion. Nowadays we see this in women wearing 3-piece suits to work. Obviously, men’s fashion is more powerful. We see male dominance in nature and in society over time. The male of the species has always been more colorful. In nature, it is the male bird that is the colorful one. In the water, male fish are more colorful. On land, the male animal has darker color and more distinct markings. The same is true of lizards. Males are the more attractive ones. This is how they protect the family. Predators will attack him because they see him. Males are obviously the more dominant. Throughout time in human society men have been more colorful. In Rome the men were in the spotlight. In European courts men wore more jewels than women. Men also wore the wig in the family. Shakespeare certainly wore interesting clothing. As I mentioned earlier, men’s three-piece suits are the height of fashion. Similarly, army fatigues, a symbol of male superiority, are now being worn by women. Again, we see men are the dominant model for society. In conclusion, men’s fashion stays around longer and is imitated more often. Therefore, men are superior even in a women’s world of fashion. One stylistically boring paragraph If we look at the world, we can see strong colors near men’s places. If we look at nature, we will see the male cardinal is bright red and has a head hairdo and the female is just brown. Also, the male goldfish is brightly colored and the female isn’t. In the animal kingdom, the lion has a mane and the female lion doesn’t. The male lizard is also the bright one of the species. Scientists say the male catches the eye of a predator so the predator will attack him and not his family. Since the female and infants are helpless, the females take on the dull colors of her surroundings not to be attacked or draw attention. It is colors like her environment that keep her safe. On the other hand, the male wants to be noticed. His role is to draw attention away from everything (especially his family) else in the environment. Therefore, males are made to stand out by nature.
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